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Expository Writing: Fear Is Harmful

February 9, 2014 by sanjanal622   

Your voice stutters, your heart starts beating faster and beads of sweat start trickling down your face. Don’t give into fear.

  When your head is clouded with to much self judgment (from fear) you may think of what you may no accomplish. When you are back stage before a piano recital, Thoughts of failure flood your mind. you think, what fi I hit the wrong note? what if I fail? Fear can mess up what you can accomplish.

  Another reason fear is harmful is that if you are nervous you may not do as well and your probably low on self confidence. For example, during your piano recital if you believe you’ll do it horribly and you get up on stage, Your fear will clog up your mind and you probably wont do as well as when you practiced. Just don’t let fear  take over when you want to accomplish something.

  Next time you are scared, just take a deep breath and think to your self I can do this, don’t think of your faults- don’t think of messing It up. Just think about what you can achieve.


  1. kylez says:

    I don’t know why but I get afraid about everything, even if it is swimming at the beach. I get afraid a lot.

  2. alissat513 says:

    I loved how well you described fear! I could easily relate to what you described fear as and I felt that you had a strong voice in the writing! You did an amazing job!

  3. anishar712 says:

    I like the voice throughout your whole post. Also great organization. You had an introduction that stated your topic. two body paragraphs giving examples of you topic, and finally a conclusion to restate your topic. Good job!

  4. yasmined710 says:

    This was such an inspiring piece. I do agree that fear is harmful, whenever I’m taking a test I’m really nervous about if I relax I end up doing much better than I would if I were stressed.

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